If words had the ability to forecast future, then this poem would have been a fortune-teller. The lines flowed out, in a flash. Where would I now be... if I had dared to listen to the silence?
Oh, this is appreciated so much, Tamy. Thank you kindly for your words. Your response made my heart jump as crafting poetry in a language not my mother tongue is always a little interesting in that I wonder if the words would resonate with others (especially native speakers). So, thank you again. :)
What a gorgeous poem, Enna. Love the interweaved silence and all the sensory detail. Beautiful !
Oh, this is appreciated so much, Tamy. Thank you kindly for your words. Your response made my heart jump as crafting poetry in a language not my mother tongue is always a little interesting in that I wonder if the words would resonate with others (especially native speakers). So, thank you again. :)
My pleasure. Loved it ! You dominate the language and the emotions come through. 🤗✨🙏